Thu 30 Jun 2005
Sitting on the porch, trying to describe the lawn:
On the far left, a crooked chain-link fence leans over an overgrown gravel drive. The drive hasn’t seen a car in years — they all park on the street. A man-sized dead sapling, fallen who knows how long ago, hunches on the drive by the gate.
Next to the drive, a fir tree stretches to roof height and bends over the lawn. Bread crumbs are scattered about its trunk and picked over by small gray-brown twittering birds. The frame of a long-departed swing watches over the other end of the yard, ten paces or so from the tree. In the space between, a swath of ankle-high grass competes for dominance with clover and dandelions.
On this side of the lawn, an uneven path of gray brick flanks our small two-story apartment building, from the drive on one side to a little shed on the other. It’s briefly interrupted by a pair of old-style basement doors that could have been imported from Kansas.
The weather has been sullen all week. Overhead, past the tops of brick tenements, past the high ridge that rears up beside the river, rain clouds sail downstream like frigates.
- Palmetto I've been a little tied up the past few days...
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8 Responses to “Mardi”
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Bryan Says:
June 30th, 2005 at 7:39 pmThis is a description of setting that would make Hemmingway proud.
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MissMeliss Says:
July 1st, 2005 at 9:36 amYour writing is so vivid!
I’m here via Michele today - we apparently posted at the same time, and I feel bad if people get skipped because of net-glitches, so I decided to visit you as well.
I’m so glad I did!
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Jonathan Says:
July 1st, 2005 at 10:41 amBryan: if I was going for Hemingway, it would have been more like “The grass was tall. The sky was cloudy.”
MissMeliss: Thanks for making sure I didn’t get skipped! I hate it when that happens.
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Beanhead Says:
July 1st, 2005 at 3:04 pmVery vivid! Here via Michele’s
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Shannin Says:
July 1st, 2005 at 3:24 pmHere via Michele…I especially liked the description of the clouds. Living in Minnesota with the prairie weather, I could see very clearly what you were saying…
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Heather Says:
July 6th, 2005 at 12:41 amI am so thoroughly disgusted with Tom Cruise that I just can’t bring myself to watch that movie! I like your blog:-)
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Michele Says:
July 6th, 2005 at 1:15 amWhat a glorious description. I love you choice of words and can imagine the fir tree that bends over the lawn.
Stopping by to say hello and to add you to my blogroll. Shame on me for not having done that sooner!
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Jonathan Says:
July 6th, 2005 at 9:42 amHeather: Having no great love for Tom Cruise myself, I tried to separate the personal from the professional, because I do think he’s a very good actor. Tim Robbins, another least-fave, was also in the movie, but the character he played (almost certainly intentional) and his ultimate fate made it fun to watch. Oh, and let me remind you that the comment link’s on top.
Michele: Thanks for blogrolling me! You have a lot of good and entertaining writers (and wannabe writers like me) on your list, and I’m honored to be one of them.